Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

We should never judge a book by its cover, and
this
quote applies to humans as well. Some
people
believe that a person's clothing style
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can say a lot about their culture as well as their character. I would completely disagree with
this
opinion, as everyone can wear
clothes
of their liking and
clothes
do not reflect their personality or where they come from. Nowadays
people
have become more judgemental about others especially
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if the person is from a different ethnicity than themselves. Looks can be
deceving
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deceiving
and
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not paint the whole picture.
Moreover
, In western countries, racism is increasing because
people
's ears are being filled with hate regarding a person's clothing.
For example
, recently in
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, citizens protested against
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womens
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women
women's
and their clothing sense because they believe that, there could be a terrorist inside the Hijab, but no one can prove
this
and it is a right of Islamic
womens
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women
women's
, to wear whatever is preferable to them.
Furthermore
, clothing should not decide someone's character, as everyone has their own preference
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wearing
clothes
that are comfortable
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them. In fact, in tourist places, thieves are known to dress well, so you don't doubt him.
On the contrary
, famous
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do not care about their clothing nowadays.
For instance
,
billionares
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billionaires
such
as Mark Zuckerberg and Bill Gates do not wear fancy suits in the public. In conclusion,
people
should not be judgemental about
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of others, as
clothes
are materialistic and everyone has their own taste according to their comfort zone. I feel
people
should be kind towards each other and should not judge anyone by their
appearence
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appearance
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • garments
  • traditional attire
  • sartorial choices
  • expressive style
  • cultural identity
  • psychological implications
  • non-verbal cues
  • globalization
  • perceptions
  • professional demeanor
  • societal norms
  • economic constraints
  • subcultures
  • fashion movements
  • individualism
  • stereotype
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