You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter: explain why you have moved describe the new house invite your friend to come and visit
Dear Nav,
I am very glad to write a letter that I and my family moved to a new house, and it is located in the heart of the farmland . The previous one was too small
as well as
a noisy area. Recently, my brother got engaged , so the members will increase in our family. In the new house, there are not only three bedrooms,
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also
a big garden and kitchen. Despite that, there is an extremely large Drawing room where I spend a lot of time
while
watching television with my family members which is an awesome time
for me to capture the memories with them.
The area is very peaceful, which you like the most because I know you always love to spend time
in a peaceful environment. I invite you to come and visit my new house where we can spend precious time
with each other while
doing both indoor and outdoor activities including drawing sketches, playing video games, hide and seek and so on. We all look forward to seeing you soon.
Yours faithfully,
Raj.Submitted by kaurgillrajveer29l on
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coherence cohesion
Try to ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single idea to make your writing clearer and more effective.
task achievement
Proofread your letter to catch minor punctuation errors, such as unnecessary spaces before commas and periods.
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The letter clearly explains the reason for the move, provides a detailed description of the new house, and extends a warm invitation.
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The tone of the letter is friendly and inviting, which is appropriate for a letter to a friend.
coherence cohesion
Your greeting and closing are both appropriate and well-executed for this context.
coherence cohesion
The logical structure of the letter is quite good, with a clear progression from explaining the move, to describing the new house, to issuing an invitation.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,