It is important for people to take risks, both in their personal lives and professional lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages

It is observed that getting

risks

are

significant

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issue

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issues

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for some people and it is not only personal lives but

also

professional

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lives. From my point of view, there are disadvantages to

this

phenomenon outweighing its advantages which I will explain in

this

essay. On the one hand, the

first

downside of taking

risks

is that one may

loose

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his job and career.

In other words

, if a

bussinesperson

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businessperson

gets a risk, he might deal with many problems. Another drawback of getting

risks

is that it could be dangerous circumstances for lives.

For example

, climbers have to use personal

equipments

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equipment

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during the climb

a

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mountain. If they do not use them, it will be bad

situations

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.

In addition

to these disadvantages are that it causes

to

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pay fine in

traffic

.

For instance

, a vehicle driver who

drive

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fast his car may be caught a

traffic

police.

As a result

of

this

condition, he may charge with some

traffic

fines.

On the other hand

, one upside of getting

risks

is that it may ensure

to win

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much more money.

For example

, people who invest their money to take bitcoins might win lots of

cashes

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cash

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.

Moreover

, the

second

advantage of taking

risks

is that it provides more social environments.

In other words

,

population

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who take

risks

try

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to find

the same situations people

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, so their social networks expanded. In conclusion,

although

, getting

risks

may have

sevaral

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several

advantages

such

as

to win

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winning

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a great amount of money and ensuring more social environments, the demerits which are

loosing

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works

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work

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, being dangerous for life, and paying

traffic

fines can easily overweigh them.