You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In your letter describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work say what kind of accommodation you would prefer You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, Greetings of the Day! I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction with my current accommodation arrangement at the UC dorm located in the commons building. I am a final year Mechanical Engineering major student and I happen to share room number 601 with a roommate who is studying Arts major. The apartment is a
two bedroom
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unit which comes with a limitation of
shared
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bathroom. My roommate usually has his friends over in the living room during the weekdays as they practice their music or drama in a group.
Moreover
, he
also
organizes parties almost every weekend which usually
continues
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till midnight. These activities create a lot of disturbance in my bedroom which doesn't allow me to focus on my studies or preparation for job interviews. Parties are
also
a nuisance which interrupts
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my sleep schedule and doesn't allow me to rest properly.
Furthermore
, I do not prefer a shared bathroom due to hygiene and cleanliness concerns. I require moving to a different apartment with a
single bedroom
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unit which should help resolve the problems that I am currently facing. Looking forward to hearing from you! Yours Faithfully, Darshit Nimavat
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