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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective reducing crime?

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 decades, considering the criminals by age, young people have the highest percentage.
This
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 and some possible solutions. First of all,
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, especially parents.
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the violent
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violent crime index
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, most
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convicts
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 had childhood trauma , their mental
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 damaged by family,
violence
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 media and social platforms. Some other cause is
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 of financial, finding
job
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 has become harder all around the world and they may think stealing is the only option to provide money. In Mongolia, crime rates were higher percentage among
unemployments
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unemployment
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. In order to solve
this problems
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, parents would be to improve the level of parental attitude, that needs to pay attention to their children’s mental health, openly discuss children’s feelings, especially teenagers.
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, in order to poverty government should invest
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 state and provide stable income .
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, irresponsible parents and the factor of lack of necessities of life seem main
cause
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causes
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of illegal activities.
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 the solution will depend upon
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 response by individuals and
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government.
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I really want to study but I’m too tired.

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