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Some people think that secondary or high school students should be taught how to use money management as it is an important life skill. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

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It is believed that providing financial education courses for teenagers in high school is important because it is a vital skill in
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modern society. I totally agree with
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 statement due to the knowledge
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 to use
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 will help students in adulthood.
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 and foremost,
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money
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 management is
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indispensible
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indispensable
 part of our life so we face
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it
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Finacial
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 education is the combination of several skills and knowledge
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 as how to spend
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 and save them. Even when you sell or buy something you always should know how much you gave and
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 it a good price for a certain product.
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, you are going to buy a new
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 and there are plenty of shops which offer you
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car
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 their prices are different because they provide different sales.One of they will give you a
car
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 for 1 million , while
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second
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 will give you it for 800
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 and 30% after one year. In
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car
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 for 1 million is more profitable than buying
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 800
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 ,there are a lot of people who
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 that basic knowledge earned from
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 without special subjects
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 enough.
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 , after
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 plenty of students use their own
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incorrect
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because they don't know how to spend them beneficially.The
money
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 management course will
acquient
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acquaint
student
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students
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 with basics of economics
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 as how banks work
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etc. To conclude, teaching
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students
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 for
money
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 management lessons in high or secondary school would benefit
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students
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 future life.
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