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Everybody should be allowed admission to university or college programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

#everybody #admission #university #college #programs #level #ability
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 has received much attention in recent times.
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 of
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 fact , universities or colleges are in action to accommodate more students in their different programmes.
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, some argue that admission programmes, in
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 institutes, need to permit everyone irrespective of their academic qualification. It has disagreed that the admission to higher
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 without considering eligibility and arguing
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 in an upcoming paragraph by exemplifying the impact of
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 a decision on
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 quality and productivity of the
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, lack of qualification in the academic programmes leads to a decrease in the quality of the graduates or post-graduates.
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, if a person with a background in economics is admitted to science , he or she may not be able to understand things appropriately.
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 they could not contribute much to
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 area.
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 leads to a gradual decrease in educational levels over the generations.
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,
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 acts create a big gap in the job market
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because of the lack of suitable candidates as per the requirement. So , even if the person got a job without specific requirements, they cannot work productively.
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 , a history background person in a technology-based company will not be able to contribute breakthrough technical discovery in a short time.
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 impacts the overall productivity of the company and in ,turn affects the economy of the
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. For the aforementioned ,reasons it is advisable to take only eligible candidates in the university to maintain the growth of the
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. In conclusion, integrity and eligibility at university level admission are of utmost importance for better quality
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 and actual growth of the individuals , company and
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