Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter – give some details about the job – mention how you came across the job opportunity – explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend. in above format.

Dear Ayesha, I hope you're doing well. I'm writing to let you know about a job opportunity I recently came across

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since it’s something I thought you should know about.

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I wasn’t actively looking for anything new, I found

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opening on a career website

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browsing for part-time work. It’s a content writing position with a remote learning company. Not only is it flexible with hours, but the pay is quite decent too.

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, they’re looking for someone who’s creative, organised, and good with words.

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, I immediately thought of you!

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, I feel

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would be a great fit for you because of your strong writing skills and background in English literature. Rather than keeping it to myself, I thought I’d share it so you could check it out.

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we usually chat about these things over coffee, I figured writing would be quicker. Let me know what you think! Take care and speak soon. Best wishes, Nisha

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coherence and cohesion

The structure is good, but try to group similar ideas together more strongly.

task achievement

You did well in addressing the task, but including examples of the job duties could enhance the response.

tone

The tone is friendly and suitable for a letter to a friend.

content

You clearly stated why the job is a good fit for your friend.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

162 words

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Write a letter to your friend about a job opportunity you came across that they might find interesting. In your letter – give some details about the job – mention how you came across the job opportunity – explain why you feel the job would be suitable for your friend. in above format.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people say the government should give healthcare the first priority, some others believe there are more important priorities to spend taxer’s money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Teamwork offers a lot of benefits in modern society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Wild animals have no use in the 21 century and trying to preserve animals now is just wastage of money. To what extent do you agree or disagree with question

Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?