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In most sucessful organizations some people believe that communication between managers and workers are the most important factor,other people say that other factors are most important. discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is believed by a few people that communication between junior and senior workers is an essential part of the
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 of the institute. whilst many people argue that there are plenty of other paramount factors. I partially agree with both statements because guidance by higher authority to the employees is better for the
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, while other factors
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 are considered to achieve goals. Imparting between higher authority and lower authority is important for task achievement and better
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. Communication would prevent misunderstanding and save from financial losses.
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, reporting to the junior will maintain relationships and improve their
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 efficiency, better confidence, and enhance their comfort zone. According to a recent survey, CEO and managers who always talk to their employees and guide them
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 their institute have a higher chance to continue
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.
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, infamous businesses and other steps
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 are considered to
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.
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, difficult tasks by senior managers create a competitive
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 so a person does
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 more than capacity and the result will be extraordinary for the
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. Healthy competition is always good for organizations.
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 experience
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 members should encourage other workers to do well
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.
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 plays a vital role in
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, a person's mood depends on the
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 they may do more creative
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 if they get very good working conditions, proper guidance, enough rest time gives them motivation towards
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 and the
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 will run successfully over the years. To conclude, a
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's higher level worker's motivation and guidance to inexperienced is very much needed for
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 and other steps,
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, the
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 less burden
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, proper rest are
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 essential
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