Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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are free admission fees, others require the price of admission. In my opinion, the advantages of paid tickets exceed the disadvantages of those. In

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essay, I write about both the benefit and weaknesses and compare them to make a conclusion.

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, the inferiority of subscriptions may decrease the number of tourists visiting the building.

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means that visitors often choose a more substantial way to spend their time. If they

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foundations which can admire paintings that cost prices, they would not

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them.

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, parks which not need entrance fees usually have more visitors than chargeable parks,

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reason is limited, an investigation shows that many tourists eager to

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a museum and be willing to spend a certain amount of money on it. The superiority of audiences affords admission fees that enhance financial income for gallery

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and artists’ incentive to create more attractive works. In order to persistently exhibit a number of artworks in

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, it needs economic support to furnish the most

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paints or photographs, as well as staff in

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, should be paid off, the suitable earnings arouse subjective initiative in their heats and

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is one of the motives why they work so hard.

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, a multitude of

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in China, usually charge a large amount each year as sustaining most artists lasting to create works and reap the benefits for

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not only improves the service system but

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more tourists to

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it. In conclusion, in

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of those factors, fee-paying

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have more vantage than

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, I appeal to

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charge for the public who want to have a great experience in

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