in many country traditional customs are being lost. why do you think this is? what can parents and school do to keep traditional customs alive?

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Every nation has it is own unique cultural traditions , but nowadays, these customers are becoming extinct. In
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with, the rapid advancement of technology has revolutionized our life . We have
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access to different social media platforms, where
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dominant . Americans predominantly share their outfits and their lifestyle with other countries via social media .
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, more people are interested in western rituals, ceremonies, music, attire, fine art and dance and even emulate them in their own country.
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, Halloween , which is
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today. Another striking reason is that travelling has become common and many people visited a myriad of nations and were introduced to their cultural norms and cultural traditions.
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, they were interested in those cultures and found their own ones boring and meaningless. Fortunately, we can be addressed
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and schools in different ways.
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role models and they imitate their actions and patterns of behaviour.
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, cultural rituals and ceremonies even parades should be practised by
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in order to set a good example for their kids.
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, in their lifespans ,
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the importance of social memes
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as the self-sacrifice of our wartime generation, myths and legends. To sum up ,
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Western societies along with the increasing number of flights to foreign countries decreasing the essence of many
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conventions,
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and schools can still hold cultural ceremonies and encourage
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to take part in them
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