Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people say that this is a positive trend, while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences. Discuss both sides of this argument and then give your own opinion.

Nowadays the world has become more digitized
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if in the
beginning
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we were using
computers
mostly for work, today it is an essential item for
education
. In
this
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peoples
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opinion
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has divided, some say that it is unhealthy and will cause problems,
others
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are more optimistic. Even though I believe that using
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a computer
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computer
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computers
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all day could be harmful, I agree that
education
should be preparing kids for the real world, where everything is on gadgets. On the one hand, using
computers
for
education
, and
then
all night watching movies and playing online games is definitely unhealthy
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. Using these goods without knowing limits may lead to back pains, eye problems and migraines, which are caused by blue light radiating from the screen. To prevent
this
from happening
students
should follow special measures,
for example
time
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schedule for using
computers
,
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special glasses while working on them and
also
do exercises on posture every half
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. Despite everything,
computers
are more convenient to study on them, than
on
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books and paper. It is easier for
students
to do research and be able to write on the same thing and send
by
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email, rather than writing everything.
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using
paper based
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materials is harmful
for
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the environment. Thanks to digitalization
students
had
their
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opportunity to continue
education
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during the pandemic period.
For example
,
softwares
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software
like Zoom, Skype,
MS
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Teams became more popular among
students
and teachers. In conclusion,
computers
are extremely useful when it comes to the
education
process
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because they allow
students
to work faster and self-study.
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people should not forget that looking at the screen a lot and sitting not right can cause many health problems, so they should do preventive activities.
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