Some prents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys ?

These days, more and more parents love to purchase a lot of knick-knacks as a game for their

kids

at home.

Although

it would make some

children

becoming

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selfish and lack

of

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gratefulness, toys could increase

children

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children's

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creativity and can be their memorable childhood stuff because they enjoy playing

them

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with them

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. On the one hand, purchasing

the

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number of trifles for

kids

would give some positive impacts since their creativity would go up when they focus on their games.

For example

, boys tend to talk by themselves when they play two robots at the same time,

hence

their communication ability can improve.

In addition

, knick-knacks

also

could be

a

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historical stuff when the

children

have matured and can be a beautiful moment

for

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in

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their childhood life.

On the other hand

, despite the benefits, these are

also

considered

as

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the

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negative development for

children

nature.

Firstly

, because they can easily obtain what they want,

kids

tend to do not

have

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a

greatful

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great

sensation in their life. They do not know

that

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how lucky their life is if it compares to

another

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other

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unlucky or poor

kids

.

Furthermore

, their probability

becoming

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of becoming

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selfish person would increase since they think that all of the luxurious toys belong to them,

nobody

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and nobody

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can touch and play

them

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with them

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. To sum up, pampering

children

by giving

all

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them all

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they want

such

as toys would affect both positive and negative development

for

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of

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children

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children's

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growth. By playing several trifles, young people become more happy and

creative

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more creative

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. Unfortunately,

kids

tend to be more selfish and lack

of

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gratefulness, since they can easily get what they want.