Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Currently, the amount of garbage produced by people is increasing and it is very threatening for future generations. There are a plethora of reasons for

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phenomenon but few will be presented in

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, the role of government in reducing waste will

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with, the trend of using more disposable items like cutlery, party plates and disposable tableware has escalated over the past decade because individuals have tough and busy routines and they try to minimise their chores but

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it is creating tons of rubbish which is very difficult to decompose.

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all the utensils are made of paper or plastic so that they could be thrown away after their use which is reducing the job of washing.

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, wastage of food and clothing is

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the main cause of rising in the quantity of garbage in the environment as natives in the developed countries are blessed with every facility and they do not compromise on anything so, they

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their least favourite things to buy some new articles.

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, secondhand clothing, which is in good condition, of advanced nations

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imported to underdeveloped countries for distribution among the poor class which indicates the abundance of resources in these lands.

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, the government can play a crucial part in decreasing the volume of litter produced by the citizens.

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, authorities could give awareness to the general public on limiting their trash by organising different seminars or broadcasting informative messages on television regarding

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situation.

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, the administration should amplify the prices of commodities which could be disposed of easily so that it becomes out of the reach of the middle class which will surely narrow down the level of waste production. In conclusion, it will not be gainsaid that there are valid justifications for the issue of little generation and its solutions, and in my

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the implementation of these should be ensured.

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task response

The essay effectively addresses the prompt by discussing the reasons for increasing garbage production and suggesting ways governments can help reduce it. The arguments are presented clearly and supported with examples.

coherence and cohesion

The introduction and conclusion are clear and effectively frame the essay. The ideas are logically organized and connected, creating a coherent flow of information throughout the essay.

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Clear and detailed examples support the main points effectively.

coherence and cohesion

The essay has a clear structure with a strong introduction and conclusion.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

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Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

326 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

consumerism
disposable culture
over-packaging
non-recyclable
public awareness
waste management
environmental impact
recycle
recycling facilities
waste separation
single-use products
infrastructure

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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Your opinion

More and more parents begin to allow their children to play on computers and tablets as they think children should learn technology skills. Do advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages or not?

In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? why do you thinks some people might not be happy to give up using Cash?

In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?