You have recently moved to a different house. Write a letter to an English- speaking friend. In your letter Explain why you moved Describe the new house Invite your friend to come and visit

Dear Dave, I’m writing to let you know that at
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we have moved to a bigger house. We just
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on living in the two-bedroom bungalow now that the twins are growing up and the new baby has arrived. So we started looking- and one thing led to another and
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here we are in our new home. I’m sure you’ll like it. We have three bedrooms now, and a very modern bathroom and kitchen. The kids are happy because there is much more space with the big living room and the garden outside. But Michel is the happiest of all because he doesn’t need to do much decorating. Why don’t you come around
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weekend and see what you think of our new place? We would all love to see you and if the weather is good we can have a barbecue in the garden. Our new address and phone number are below, so give us a call and let us know when to expect you. Lots of love, Francoise
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