Write a letter to invite your friend to a music concert. In your letter: When and where the music concert is going to be What type of music will be played there Why your friend will enjoy it.

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Dear Jan, I hope

this

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letter finds you well and I’d like you to join me for the concert which is going to be held

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weekend! I know you’re a big fan of The Planet and I’m so excited to share the news that

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band will perform on

21st

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the 21st

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of February at the Grand Stadium in our city. It will start at 7.30 p.m and

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for at least 3 hours. According to the information provided on their official website, the band will perform their most

poplar

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folk songs and play games with fans. The audience might have a chance to

be ask

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to dance together with the members. It will be a fantastic night! I know that you’ve been busy with work recently and are under lots of pressure. I’m sure you’ll enjoy the concert as it’ll be a good stress reliever and make you feel refreshed! Looking forward to

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you there. With love, Sara

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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

Best regards,
Warm wishes,

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

159 words

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