In many countries, paying for things using mobile phones (cellphones) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages?

there is no doubt that online shopping these days is one of the most used trades on the internet. there are some

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that paying

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for items

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with their mobile phone is more beneficial,

others

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while others

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argue that

this

may cause a lot of problems

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them. In

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and explain my support

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the former view. One of the big obstacles facing online

payment

is

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apply

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security

privacy

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of privacy

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. once you start

this

process your will be exposed to several damages.

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, if customers tried to make

payment

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payments

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from untrusted websites, they will be exposed to their personal data being hacked or

expesed

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exposed

or even their bank accounts.

besides

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,that

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you cannot

procced

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proceed

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with

payment

using a cellphone

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apply

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unless you have already online bank accounts opened earlier. In opposite, mobiles

payment

made

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huge

differences

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in easing the whole

processs

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process

for customers.

Although

having all mentioned issues earlier regarding them, it can be simply avoided by certain

percausions

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precautions

to take and security validation. It's

vital

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need

nowdays

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nowadays

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, especially as it's available around clock

also

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easy to access anywhere, so no need to go

for

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to

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certain places in order to pay for something.

this

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the importance of these apps

of

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for

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payment

.

Finally

,

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essay argued the advantages and disadvantages

regarding

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of

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paying with online apps. Even with some disadvantages on

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issue ,

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I think that paying with mobiles made

a huge positive changes

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huge positive changes

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to

whole

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the whole

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process and it's completely necessary to apply using the right

percautions

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precautions

.