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Many people think that zoos are not good enough for animals and they should be improved or animals must go to natural life. What is your opinion ?

#people #zoos #animals #life
Most
people
 believe that today's
zoos
 are not good enough for wild
animals
 and they do not meet the demand.
Firstly
, they can not eat as much as they want and they can not enjoy freedom.
In addition
,
people
 do not look after them very well and the conditions created for them are not satisfactory. So
zoos
 should be developed and
then
animals
 can live well. In my opinion,
zoos
 are not good enough for wildlife. They cannot enjoy
freedom
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 and can not
hunt
 in the zoo.
For example
, wolves are wild, offensive
animals
. They
hunt
 the whole day for looking after their children. In the zoo, they are
serf
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,
animals
 can not
hunt
 in captivity and they can not forage, so they are forced to eat whatever humans give them. I think, keeping them in captivity is not
right
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 thing to do because they are alive and keeping them in cages is not good for
people
 to watch, so I do not visit
zoos
 at all. Many
people
 may think that
zoos
 are better for
animals
 and it is better to survive in captivity for them than to die quickly in
the
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wildlife, but I strongly disagree. Because they are restricted from all the activities they want to do, they can neither
hunt
 nor eat good food, I think. My conclusion is that
people
 should be kinder to
animals
 and I am in
favor
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 of closing
zoos
 if they do not provide good enough conditions for the
animals
 there should be released back to their homes, mother nature. I think they must be eager for it.
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