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With the increase in the use of mobile phones and computers,fewer people are writing letters. Some people think that the traditional skill of writing letters will disappear completely. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Some individuals claim that traditional writing will likely be on the verge of extinction
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 the increase in using phones and computers. I partly agree with
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 statement.
Although
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 digital typing can express ideas at a faster pace, we still need organic writing to convey the
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 of the writers. One of the reasons leading to
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 phenomenon is that digital writing on mobiles or computers supports users' information transmission at a fast pace.
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, in some companies, when the manager wants to change the strategies, they will choose to send the plan via text message or email to employees so they can promptly respond to requests.
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, using mobiles and computers
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 AI support, meaning that people have limitless resources to freely express their ideas or emotions.
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, organic writing will be replaced by digital writing because of the convenience it brings to users. Despite the many benefits of digital, traditional writing has not been completely eradicated. The reason why it still exists is that writing
letters
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 to family members or friends shows their best regards.
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, in some cases, handwriting will have special meaning for the receiver that reads those
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.
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, on a person’s birthday, writing wishes through
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 will make them feel more appreciated and happier rather than texting or emailing. In brief, writing
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 will still be used in future. In conclusion,
although
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 digital writing will develop more, the importance of writing by hand will not be changed and disappear.

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The Greeting

Depending on the style and aim of the letter, you will need to adapt your greeting.

Always start an informal letter in the ways:

  • Dear + name
  • Hi / Hello + name

‘Dear...’ is more appropriate, so stick with this.

For a formal letter there are two options for the greeting:

  • Use Dear Sir or Madam if you don’t know the name of the person you are writing to.
  • Use Dear + surname if you do know their name, e.g. Dear Mr Smith or Dear Mrs Jones.

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