You visited a hotel last week and left some items behind. Write a letter to the manager stating 1. Details of your stay 2. How important the items are to you 3. How you would want the items to the sent to you

Dear Hotel Manager I am ecstatic to remember my
last
stay at your hotel from 1st December to 15th December on the
third
floor of 205 room which provided a spectacular river view through the room window and I felt that I am in the middle of the ocean despite my stay in a closed room. As you remember, I used to do my office work from the hotel itself since there was a huge snow outside and while doing the checkout I forgot my office laptop and personal mobile too. As you know, I cannot work without my laptop and my employer cannot pay my salary without the work.
In addition
, if I cannot do my job right now and I may not complete and deliver the project on time.
However
, I am taking my phone calls by using another mobile and I can wait for a week to collect the mobile but my office laptop I am thinking to collect without any
further
delay. I hope you understand my critical situation.
Hence
, I would request you to please send my belongings to my employer's address which I stated below and it would be appreciated if you could send the parcel tracking number to know the status of the movement.
In addition
, I am willing to pay an extra charge if there is a speed post service available for the same. I look forward to hearing an update soon from your end with the parcel and tracking information. Best regards Lakshmi.
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