Physical appearance may play an important role in many spheres of life: in the person’s success in school, in relationships with people, in the choice of a career path. Say whether you agree or disagree with it, and if you see it as a positive or negative factor.

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There is a belief that a good-looking person has an easier

life

than those with a less attractive appearance, either in job opportunities or relationships with others. In

this

essay, I agree with the statement, yet I see it brings negative impacts on

people

life

To begin

with, appearance is indeed the

first

thing

people

see in a certain person which makes it an impactful impression.

For instance

, a well-styled person can be perceived as a high-class, educated, and wealthy persona

thus

earning better treatment than those coming with an ordinary style.

Therefore

, some

people

can have it easier in their

life

such

as getting more opportunities to step on the career path ladder and getting more appreciated by others.

As a result

, the phenomenon is affecting how

people

put their looks as a priority above all else, which turns out to be a negative impact. To be seen as pretty,

people

start doing whatever it takes to be beautiful which oftentimes gets interpreted wrongly for being skinny and having fair skin. Little did

people

know that the misinterpretation results in some community to be suffering from eating disorders to malpractice of plastic surgery. It can be seen from the fact that the number of youngsters suffering from

such

illness

Fix the agreement mistake

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increased significantly more than it was a decade ago. In conclusion, the phenomenon of appearance defining your

life

path can not be denied for a number of

people

have already experienced it

first

-hand.

However

, I think the tragedy should no longer

last

since it impacts

people

's lives in a negative way.

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