Physical appearance may play an important role in many spheres of life: in the person’s success in school, in relationships with people, in the choice of a career path. Say whether you agree or disagree with it, and if you see it as a positive or negative factor.

There is a belief that a good-looking person has an easier
life
than those with a less attractive appearance, either in job opportunities or relationships with others. In
this
essay, I agree with the statement, yet I see it brings negative impacts on
people
's
life
.
To begin
with, appearance is indeed the
first
thing
people
see in a certain person which makes it an impactful impression.
For instance
, a well-styled person can be perceived as a high-class, educated, and wealthy persona
thus
earning better treatment than those coming with an ordinary style.
Therefore
, some
people
can have it easier in their
life
such
as getting more opportunities to step on the career path ladder and getting more appreciated by others.
As a result
, the phenomenon is affecting how
people
put their looks as a priority above all else, which turns out to be a negative impact. To be seen as pretty,
people
start doing whatever it takes to be beautiful which oftentimes gets interpreted wrongly for being skinny and having fair skin. Little did
people
know that the misinterpretation results in some community to be suffering from eating disorders to malpractice of plastic surgery. It can be seen from the fact that the number of youngsters suffering from
such
illness
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increased significantly more than it was a decade ago. In conclusion, the phenomenon of appearance defining your
life
path can not be denied for a number of
people
have already experienced it
first
-hand.
However
, I think the tragedy should no longer
last
since it impacts
people
's lives in a negative way.
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