In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?
There are several ways to get a home to live in,
however
buying a Add a comma
however,
house
completely and renting it are by far the most popular ones. Of the two of them, buying a house
and owning a home seems to be more prevalent one
some countries, in which people deem it important to have a home and therefore
compel themselves to buy one
.
It is important to understand buying a house
is not an irrational decision and there are quite a few merits to that. To begin
, a house
is a great asset because houses normally go up in price, hence
they retain their value
. Moreover
, in some countries, owning a house
is a milestone in one
's life and an indication of social status. Furthermore
, since the house
owner is considered their own landlord they do not have to worry about answering someone else. For instance
, a homeowner can make changes in house
structure without anybody's permission to do so.
In my view, this
is the right way and its positives heavily outweigh the negatives. The most important reason here, in my opinion, is the value
of the house
which will be maintained any other position may lose its value
over time but not a house
unless it is not looked after at all. In some cases, even the house
value
can get more. For example
, in some countries, housing prices have seen a drastic change due to
the location they are built upon.
To conclude
, it is a well-known fact that owning a house
is more favourable in comparison to renting one
owing to the fact they are a valuable asset and a show of social rank. I also
think that buying a house
is a good idea and an achievable goal that we should strive for.Submitted by parsajahan3 on
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