It has been argued that globalization has been of unquestionable benefit to the world and that the people who criticize it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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These days globalization is one of the heated topics among common

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. The majority agree that

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growth has lots of benefits like increased employment and better import and export opportunities. But, few

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argue that

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has a negative impact and they are not in favour of

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. I agree that globalization is required and advantageous for a nation.

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and foremost, globalisation provides lots of opportunities to the youth and they get jobs when rich

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invest their money in undeveloped

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, due to ,

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our nation gets new technologies and information which can be

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used to build the same product.

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, these days we have a shortage of chips which is required in all-electric vehicles and companies are allocating lots of funds to establish factories in undeveloped nations.

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is not only providing jobs and by ,learning youth can work in other companies and can help the nation to grow.

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, Foreign trade has helped in many other ways

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are now comfortable learning the culture of other

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and they trust each other.

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, the education system is one of the biggest examples of

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where universities are opening branches in

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that are not in a position to invest and with

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youth is getting a better education system.

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, a student who completed study at a foreign university with

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they can learn about both

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' cultures. In conclusion, many

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are against

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positive development and criticise the facts which actually they do not know how beneficial those are. I am in support of the development which provides better opportunities and better technologies.

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not only helps to grow but,

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, reduces the conflicts within

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by knowing the culture.

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