It has been argued that globalization has been of unquestionable benefit to the world and that the people who criticize it stand in the way of progress. To what extent do you agree or disagree

These days globalization is one of the heated topics among common
people
. The majority agree that
this
growth has lots of benefits like increased employment and better import and export opportunities. But, few
people
argue that
this
has a negative impact and they are not in favour of
this
. I agree that globalization is required and advantageous for a nation.
First
and foremost, globalisation provides lots of opportunities to the youth and they get jobs when rich
countries
invest their money in undeveloped
countries
.
Also
, due to ,
this
our nation gets new technologies and information which can be
further
used to build the same product.
For example
, these days we have a shortage of chips which is required in all-electric vehicles and companies are allocating lots of funds to establish factories in undeveloped nations.
This
is not only providing jobs and by ,learning youth can work in other companies and can help the nation to grow.
In addition
, Foreign trade has helped in many other ways
people
are now comfortable learning the culture of other
countries
and they trust each other.
Furthermore
, the education system is one of the biggest examples of
this
where universities are opening branches in
countries
that are not in a position to invest and with
this
youth is getting a better education system.
For example
, a student who completed study at a foreign university with
this
they can learn about both
countries
' cultures. In conclusion, many
people
are against
this
positive development and criticise the facts which actually they do not know how beneficial those are. I am in support of the development which provides better opportunities and better technologies.
This
not only helps to grow but,
also
, reduces the conflicts within
countries
by knowing the culture.
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