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Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while others think that it is essential for mankind to continue to explore the universe in which we live . Discuss both sides and give your opinion .

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It is an extremely undeniable fact that nowadays
people
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 have become more and more inquisitive about
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 investigations.It is believed by some sections of society that
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 exploration is meaningless and it is a waste of resources,whereas others believe that
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 is very important for mankind.Considering today’s circumstances,
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 essay will discuss both views as far as I am concerned I am in the favour of the latter notion. To commence with,according to some sections of society,the government should use that much amount in the positive development of the nation
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 of
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.To elaborate , equipment for
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 and
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 the process of that
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 consume an extreme amount of money,which should spend on multiple facilities in order to provide individuals with a better and more comfortable life.
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,there is no surety provided by the scientists that all the
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 will succeed.
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,many countries tried to land their spacecraft on Marc but in the end, they got failed.In spite of doing
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 if the government provided facilities to the
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 they could lead their nation in positive ways.
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,considering today’s circumstances,increasing the rate of pollution with time affects the earth’s environment and not only
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 the population rate is increasing rapidly.So it is oblivious that,the earth could not handle the cruelty of these generations.so looking for a better place to live has become the only way to secure our future.
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,by exploring the universe,we could be able to find out the planet where
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 could live and
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 we can observe the atmosphere of that planet.
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,recently
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 organisation named Tesla sent their spacecraft to the moon and Marc and they found some evidence of water which is a positive sight for the
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. In conclusion,
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 some experiments faced failure,by doing
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 again and again we could be able to migrate into universal
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.considering those consequences I firmly stand with the
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • astronomical costs
  • earthbound issues
  • tangible benefits
  • technological spin-offs
  • innovation
  • long-term investment
  • habitability
  • interplanetary travel
  • sustainable exploration
  • spacefaring nations
  • international collaboration
  • deep space
  • the final frontier
  • cosmic perspective
  • frontiers of science
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