In many cities around the world pollution levels have risen in recent years. Why are some cities becoming more polluted? What effects does this have? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Lot

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A lot

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of regions in the world get higher

pollution

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levels in the current years. The

causing

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causes

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of

pollution

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that

has

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have

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increased in many

of

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apply

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cities

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in

this

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world could be too many

vehicles

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lack

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a lack

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of green public

areas

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. Those

of

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apply

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problems give bad impacts on health and

environment

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the environment

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. There are many more

vehicles

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in

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on

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the road because people tend to be using private

car

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cars

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or motorcycles rather than using public transportation. Because of

this

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too many

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vehicles

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it

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apply

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will

generates

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generate

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more polluted particles

to

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in

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the

air

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. The more

vehicles

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will be the more

contaminations

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contamination

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. The other aspect

of

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causing

this

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is

lack

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the lack

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of green public

areas

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. There are just some plants

exist

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that exist

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in the

cities

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. Many

of

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apply

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areas

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were

builded

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built

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for

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a skyscraper

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skyscraper

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skyscrapers

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. Just

few

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a few

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of

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apply

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buildings

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vertical

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the vertical

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garden

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gardens

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to give more green

areas

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.

The green

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Green

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public

areas

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can contribute

of

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fresh

air

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by their ability for processing Carbon

Dioxyde

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dioxide

. Pollutions give bad impacts

especially

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for

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on

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human’s

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human

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health.

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air

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pollution

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with xenobiotic particles in the

air

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is very dangerous for

lungs

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the lungs

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. It is can get into

human’s

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human

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lungs because it is a small particle mixed with the

air

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when humans breathe. The other effect could be worse

to

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on

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the human’s

dingestion

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digestion

digestive

system because of water

pollution

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. If there is water

pollution

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everywhere it will

much

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more

ptahogen

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pathogen

pathogenic

pathogens

that

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than

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duplicate. One

of

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apply

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the illness

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illness

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illnesses

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that can happen because of water

pollution

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is Cholera.

Environment

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The environment

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also

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can be not good due to

the

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apply

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air

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pollution

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. It will

can

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apply

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make

ozone

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the ozone

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layer thinner and increase the global heat waves

then

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causing

the

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climate change. In conclusion, the

rises

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rise

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of

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in

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pollution

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that happen in many

cities

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because of the number of

vehicles

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out of limit and the public green

areas

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in the

cities

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has

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have

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decreased

time

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from time

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to time. It is

therefore

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worse

situation

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situations

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can happen

such

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as the illness spread

in

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to

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human

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humans

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and the quality of

environment

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the environment

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will be bad.