Most schools set their pupils homework to be completed on their own after the day’s lessons. However, not everyone is in favour of this. Write an essay discussing the pros and cons of giving pupils homework and express your opinion about this topic.

There is
long-running
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a long-running
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debate on the benefits of
homework
. I have taken a look at some key arguments to provide you with a summary of the advantages and disadvantages of
homework
.
Lets
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begin with
advantages
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the advantages
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.
Homework
sets children up to manage their time and plan out their time.
This
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These
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skills will provide them
huge
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with huge
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amount of advantages when they enter
senior
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their senior
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high school years, and even when they
stat
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start
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working no matter where. Completing
homework
from
early
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an early
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age will make children
habit
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a habit
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to do
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of doing
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their work. Another advantage
from
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of
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homework
is that teachers can track their
students
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student's
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progress. Submitting
homework
will allow teachers to see how you are up to material and if there is some need
of
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for
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help they can give you advice
how
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on how
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to correct your answers. There
is
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also
disadvantages
from
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to
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homeworks
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homework
.
Homework
eats up free time. After
long
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a long
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day of boring lessons in school
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,
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no one wants to have so
many
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homework
that they need to spend other part of their day
instead
of going out with friends and
relax
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.
Also
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homework
Is rarely valuable. Most of
homework
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the homework
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that teachers give is from
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the internet
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internet
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and students can easily find them and copy. My opinion is that
homeworks
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homework
need
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needs
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to be something interesting so students
be
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are
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excited to write them not
getting
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get
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bored.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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