An old car was left on the street near your street several weeks ago. The car is now causing a problem for residents. Write a letter to the Council. In your letter: Describe the car Outline the problems it is causing Tell the Council what you want them to do about it

Dear Councilor, I am writing to you to inform you about an issue that has arisen recently,
due to
an out-to-date
car
parked near to our compound for the past few weeks.
To begin
with, I will give you
further
details about the
car
's appearance. The plate number is ET781KA, the brand is Ford Focus and the colour is dark red.
Additionally
, the vehicle has one broken window and the tires are seriously damaged.
Furthermore
, it is actually occupying a resident parking place,
thus
the neighbours can't leave their private vehicles there. Since the parking options are fairly limited, all the residents have complained about it. I would highly appreciate it if you
can
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either notify the authorities regarding the situation or find another solution for removing the
car
.
Besides
this
, tracking down the
car
owner might be necessary. Thank you in advance for your prompt attention to
this
urgent matter. Yours faithfully, Andrea Smith
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task response
Ensure that the description of the car focuses on the problems it is causing rather than its appearance.
coherence cohesion
Organize the letter with more clear and distinct paragraphs to improve coherence and cohesion.
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