Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, and what effects does it have on the people concerned and on society as a whole?
Nowadays, in numerous states around the globe,
illiteracy
has been a wide- ranging
drawback. Correct your spelling
wide-ranging
Main
causes towards Correct article usage
The main
this
case appears
to be focused Change the verb form
appear
in
two cases, Change preposition
on
therefore
two effects also
appear to be possible. It seems to be that the major factor is the increased poverty
level. Poverty
may lead to many people lacking fees to pay for their education or even lack money to buy study materials, such
as books, notebooks, pen
and pencils. Fix the agreement mistake
pens
For instance
; in countries such
as India, according to
the latest data which was from 2022, has said that the poverty
rate among
India has Change preposition
in
been
reached Unnecessary verb
apply
into
83% Change preposition
apply
percent
and Change the spelling
per cent
this
has caused the illiteracy
rate go
up Fix the infinitive
to go
a
5% Correct article usage
apply
percent
higher than it has been in Change the spelling
per cent
a
2020. Another Change the article
apply
following
cause is Correct word choice
apply
the
child labor, Correct article usage
apply
that
is exacerbating the Correct pronoun usage
which
illiteracy
rate increase. Many of the children in underdeveloped countries try to get jobs and hence
skip education, so as to help in fending for their families. The effects of this obstacles
on citizens, Change the determiner
this obstacle
these obstacles
as well as
society as a whole
can be quite excessive. First of all, being unable to read or write, means they have never been Add the comma(s)
whole,
learnt
in school before, so they most likely have never been taught the most basicVerb problem
taught
knowledges
, in Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
result
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a result
this
can limit one’s access to information. These communities may not learn how to prevent certain diseases or how to get medication for illnesses. Another widely-observed
effect on society may be slow development. Since Correct your spelling
widely observed
poverty
may be the main cause of illiteracy
, the
country with high Correct article usage
a
level
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levels
illiteracy
can suffer from low GDP levels. In conclusion, Change preposition
of illiteracy
poverty
and child labor
seem to be the main causes, and they impact both individuals and society in the areas affected.Change the spelling
labour
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