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e-books are more popular than traditional ones. Do you agree or disagree?

The pie charts give information about the
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 used for residential,
industry
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industrial
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 and agricultural purposes in
San
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Diego
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,
California
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 and the world as a whole. Overall, the main purpose for using
water
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 in
San
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Diego
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 county and
California
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 is for domestic tasks while other places in the world chiefly use
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 for farming. The
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 consumption of
California
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 for the industry is slightly higher than other places in the world. In detail, the amount of
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 used in households in
San
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Diego
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 is highest, at 60%, followed by that in
California
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, at 39%. The
water
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 usage of other places around the globe accounts for the lowest figure, at only 8%.
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, the
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 consumption of other countries for agricultural activities is significantly higher than the other two countries, at 69% while the amounts of
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 used in
San
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Diego
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 and
California
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 for the same purpose are 17%, and 28% respectively. Regarding industry, the amount of
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 consumed by people in
California
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 for industrial activities is
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, at 33% while the figures for
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Diego
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 and other nations share the same statistic, at 23%.

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    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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