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The development of tourism contributed to
English
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 becoming the most prominent
language
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 in the
world
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. Some
people
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 think
this
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 will lead to
English
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 becoming the only
language
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 to be spoken globally. What are the advantages and
disadvamtages
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disadvantages
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 having one
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 in the
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.
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 In our modern life,
people
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 travel often, which is the reason for the rapid development of the
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language
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. According to large groups,
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 will increase the popularity of the
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language
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 and bring more
people
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 around the
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 to speak
English
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. In
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 essay, I will explain the pros and cons of being monolingual. On the one hand, it has many advantages if the society speaks only
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.
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, speaking the same
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 allows for easy communication between the two
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.
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, they can effectively communicate with other
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, which leads to the exchange of knowledge and ideas.
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, it will cause the economy to grow, which will make society flourish.
On the other hand
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, as
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 speaking develops, mother tongue learning decreases. Parents do not teach their children their mother tongue. But
people
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 learn
English
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 for better life and work.
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, tourism will be greatly affected by
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 as there will be no point in visiting other
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 , where visitors will find the same culture which is being followed by their natives. As an example, we can take foreign
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 as an example, in recent years there has been a decline in beaches in foreign
countries
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. There,
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cabs
 are learning the languages of other
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, forgetting their own languages. In conclusion, having a common
language
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 makes communication easier and leads to community development.If more
people
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 around the
world
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 could converse in
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, it would encourage communication around the
world
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 and bring many benefits.
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