Today, people have become accustomed to living in “throwaway” society which means that they use things for a short time and then throw away. What are the causes of this? What problems may this lead to?
These days people become more habitual to buy new
things
instead
of repairing them which causes
the problem
of short-term use
of the old product which consequently
leads to use
and trow trends.The main causes
of this
issue are exciting advertisements related to new upcoming products
and the unnecessary expense of faulty products
. This
can leads to the loss of natural habitat due to excessive use
of the environment.
On the one hand, there are various causes
of use
and throw trends first
and foremost, religious advertising on consumers' phones and television. To elaborate, companies are now more serious about their marketing strategies, spend massive money on advertisements, and they have the main goal to attract more and more people. For instance
, apple company annually release new i phone with almost the same features, which attract
individuals to buy a new phone at a more expensive price which eventually contributed to Correct subject-verb agreement
attracts
this
problem
. Secondly
, now people prefer to buy new things
instead
of repairing old
one. Since repairing old Add an article
the old
an old
products
are an
expensive methods for the same feature Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
things
. Therefore
, this
habits of buying new things
cause any
problems.
Correct quantifier usage
apply
On the other hand
, there are many compelling effects produced by unnecessary things
of goods. The primary reason is that it creates the problem
of deforestation because of the excessive manufacturing of household tools. To explicate, many products
made of wood which comes
from wood and manufacturing companies are now Correct subject-verb agreement
come
created
man-made catastrophes for humans. Wrong verb form
creating
For example
, in recent decades companies manufacture many household things
which cause the loss of natural habitat.
In conclusion, although
commercial marketing become more popular it causes
the problem
of overuseuse
and overthrow of goods which Correct your spelling
overuses
overuse use
consequently
leads to a threat to plants and forest
.Fix the agreement mistake
forests
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