Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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With the
development
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of medical science and technology, more and more
people
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have a tendency of trying
alternative
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medicines
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and
treatments
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instead
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of visiting their usual
doctors
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. In my opinion, it is a positive
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. Standing in patients' shoes,
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trend has more advantages than disadvantages. Using
alternative
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medicines
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and
treatments
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can promote the competition in
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domain, increasing
doctors
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' and
medicines
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' performance, which can improve
people
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's health level. It is believed that the cost of visiting an excellent usual doctor is great;
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, many poor
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can't afford it, making their medical conditions worse.
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,
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medicines
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and
treatments
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can be low-priced, making the poor can have
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better medical treatment. Many
people
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are concerned with that
alternative
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medicines
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and
treatments
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are not familiar
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you as well as your usual
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, which means they are unfamiliar with your
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as well as your past medical histories, so they can impair your health conditions. They may recommend a new medicine or treatment for you without knowing you are allergic
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something;
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, making you suffer, and they may
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hurt your feelings by making a terrible and unsuitable joke.
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, with the
development
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of information technology, computers can know you as well as your usual
doctors
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, and
alternative
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medicines
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and
treatments
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can take
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of it, making them more comfortable and
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. I think there are more advantages than disadvantages for
people
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trying
alternative
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medicines
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and
treatments
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, and
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trend can promote the
development
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of
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medical services and the competence of usual
doctors
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • alternative medicines
  • treatments
  • positive development
  • negative development
  • health problems
  • usual doctor
  • access
  • personalized approach
  • holistic well-being
  • lack of regulation
  • evidence-based research
  • proper medical treatment
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