More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a morden life style which can not be treated with morden medicines. Some people think that a return to a traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extend to you agree?

In our time most people are suffering from health problems
that
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caused by our modern
life style
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lifestyle
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which can not be treated with today's medicines. I believe that in that
case
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we should return to
a
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traditional medicine.
To begin
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our modern
life style
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is the cause of our health issues
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what
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we should handle in our modern
life
.
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, in our everyday
schedule
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we have coffee more than water which can be
health
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problem after getting old or even earlier.
Moreover
,
fastfood
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fast food
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changed our healthy lifestyle after its invention and made people disable to cook.
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other words, people getting lazier than
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before due to outdoor foods.
This
could be changed if we start cooking our own meal
instead
of buying it.
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, if we start to consume healthy food with
fresh
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product
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it can change our lives
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the
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better future and live without
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disease and
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outweighing
. In conclusion, I believe that we still have a chance to handle
this
problem without modern medicine and take responsibility to change our modern
life style
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lifestyle
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.
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