Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. (Cam 14 test 1)
Bad situations will always be a part of the majority of the human heart. Unsatisfactory jobs or a shortage of money are examples of it. Some societies believe that a bad situation has to be accepted while others believe that it is better to try and improve
such
a situation. The two sides of this
argument will be thoroughly analysed and discussed in this
essay before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
First
of all, some folk argue that it is best to accept unpleasant conditions such
as a displeasing job or poverty. This
is because accepting those positions means no burden attached to folk's minds and individuals can be more focused on being grateful for their activity. Furthermore
, we ourselves determined our happiness. For instance
, if we are grateful and feel happy with our hearts, it can generate positive thoughts that make us grateful for our life.
Nevertheless
, some people believe that bad position should be improved. This
is due to coping with displeased conditions that can drive folk to a better soul. Although
not all people can change those positions, it is worth trying. One clear example is Nex Carlos, an Indonesian food flogger. In 2010 Nex usually cope with unpleasant conditions because he was only a salesman that has a low salary. However
, in 2017 he tried to improve his life by making youtube videos that make him one of the most successful YouTubers in Indonesia today.
To summarise, the two sides of the argument concern ways to cope with bad situations. However
, after a thorough analysis of both sides, it is clear that the idea to try and improve unpleasant circumstances can be supported. I believe with trying to improve such
circumstances can drive people to have a better life , moreover
if we never try we never know, so why don't we try?Add a comma
,moreover
Submitted by dzackyhabibi on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?