Some people believe that the purpose of education is to prepare people to useful members of society. Others think that the purpose of education is to help people to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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MODERN EPOCH, IT IS AN IRREFUTABLE AND SIGNIFICANT FACT THAT
EDUCATION
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PLAYS AN IMPERATIVE ROLE IN THE DEVELOPMENT OF PERSONAL AND SOCIAL
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, SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT THE MAJOR PURPOSE OF GETTING AN
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IS TO FULFILL PERSONAL
GOALS
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. WHEREAS, FEW PROTOGNISTS PONDER THAT FOR ACHIEVING SOCIAL
GOALS
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EDUCATION
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IS A MUST. THE
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AND FOREMOST ARGUMENT CLAIMS THAT
EDUCATION
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IS AN APPROPRIATE WAY BY WHICH SOCIAL NEEDS ARE FULFILLED.
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CAN BE DONE BY GIVING A DONATION TO NEEDY PEOPLE IN
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SOCIETY.
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, AN EDUCATED PERSON
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EDUCATE OTHER AND GIVE THEM THE RIGHT DIRECTION FOR THE FUTURE. IN THE SAME CONTEXT, SUNDAR PICHAI CURRENT CEO OF GOOGLE GIVES A MOTIVATIONAL LECTURE ON JOSH TALKS AND PROVIDES FINANCIAL SUPPORT FOR THE WEAKER SECTION OF SOCIETY. THAT SHOWS SOCIAL NEEDS CAN BE FULFILLED THROUGH
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AND IT IS ONLY THE BEST WAY TO INCREASE LIVING STANDARDS.
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, SOME PEOPLE HAVE THEIR OWN AND GIVEN
GOALS
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,
EDUCATION
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IS THE RIGHT WAY TO ACHIEVE MILESTONES.
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, MOST OF THE CURRENT IPS BELONGS TO A WEAKER SECTION OF SOCIETY
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MEANT THROUGH THE RIGHT
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AND MOTIVATION
GOALS
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CAN BE ACHIEVED. DREAMS WITH OPEN CAN ONLY BE ACHIEVED THROUGH
EDUCATION
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. TO CONCLUDE, IT IS TRULY MANIFEST THAT
EDUCATION
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FULFILLED MULTIPLE
GOALS
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AND HELPS TO INCREASE THE LIVING STANDARD OF SOCIETIES.
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IS
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TRUE MOTIVATION FOR TARGETING PERSONAL AND SOCIAL
GOALS
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • collective progression
  • civic sense
  • self-improvement
  • fulfillment
  • democratic processes
  • career goals
  • ethics
  • personal development
  • societal contribution
  • educational systems
  • interdependence
  • economy
  • culture
  • individual success
  • well-being
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