Teenagers face a lot of problems in school and at home. What is the cause of this? How can parents for this?
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.
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parents
. Also
, if they have
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do have
money
, they may join commercial
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a commercial
money
. When they are at school, the lesson may be less interesting and they do another works
during the lesson or their tutors may be not friendly. So they have Fix the agreement mistake
other work
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money
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parents
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, they always Correct pronoun usage
their parents
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psychologist
.
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weighted
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the conclusion
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