Technology is becoming progressively universal in the fullness of time, classroom teachers will be totally substituted for technology. do you agree or disagree on this.

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is constantly on the rise.Even classrooms are among the many places that enjoy the usage and benefits of
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that
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teachers
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will be totally substituted for
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. Analysing the incapability of disciplining the
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students
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with
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, as well as
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in the learning process of
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taught with
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will prove
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, A robotic teacher made with artificial intelligence would lack sufficient control over its
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students
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, it is widely known that kids need to be thoroughly watched by their
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to be sure that they take their classwork seriously and do not fool around when classes are going on.sadly,
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is a task robotic
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will be incapable of carrying out.
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makes it clear that
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will never be totally substituted for
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, the learning process of
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would be disrupted if they are taught by robotic
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.which may slow down some
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' ability to comprehend information taught in lessons.
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, kids love to be motivated before lessons are taught effectively.
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is a quality that many human crews have but robotic faculty do not have.
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it becomes apparent that human faculty will be replaced with robotic faculty in a
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. To summarise, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary discipline to properly give instructions to
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that
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teachers
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will be totally substituted for
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. After
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analysis
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subject. it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over
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-driven teaching will always be greater than the
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effects, and because of
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,
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will never be replaced
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • substituted
  • prevalent
  • crucial
  • enhance
  • support
  • guidance
  • interaction
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