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many people are using online language translator, do that benefits over-weigh the disadvantages?

#people #language #translator #over-weigh
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These days a lot of societies prefer to use online translator
apps
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 than learn the language.
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apps
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 that translate languages help
people
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 to communicate easily, in my opinion,
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 essay will show that the drawbacks outweigh the benefits because of a lack of patience. On the one hand,
apps
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 that translate different languages enable
people
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 to communicate freely.
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 to say, if
people
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 go to a new place and the native speaks a different tribe from her, it implies that the visitor has to speak their language meaning the person can use the internet
apps
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 to interpret for her when she is communicating with the native speakers.
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, in the Buganda region, the community uses Luganda to talk to each other and when travellers come around, most of them adopt
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translating
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 for the public
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 making communication easy.
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, I believe it would be better for tourists to learn the basic words before visiting the place.
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, I believe lack of patience among the community and the tourists during the process of using internet speech translators.
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, when tourist uses online speech texts to talk to the public, the members tend to feel bored when waiting for the statements to be transformed into their mother tongue and
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 not only leads to
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 ignoring the visitor but it
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 to
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 of interest about what he is talking about
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 patience is lost.
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, there are a lot of travellers who feel isolated in new places
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 of not being able to learn the mother tongue of the area. In my opinion, I agree that members who tour new places should
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 learn how to speak
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a foreign
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 language. In conclusion,
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 some members think that internet translators help
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the crowd
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 to talk to each other, in my opinion, l believe travellers should learn the basic sentences of native speakers than using
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the app
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app
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 to talk to communities
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 the negatives outweigh the positives.
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 the immigration offices consider the negative side.
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