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Some schools start teaching a foreign language in primary school. Do the advantages of teaching foreign languages to young children outweigh its disadvantages?

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There are different languages being spoken in the world, especially
English
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 which became a crucial part of life. So, In my point of view, it is beneficial for children to learn a foreign
language
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 which is imperative for their future.
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schools,
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 and French are compulsory subjects now. Which has many advantages. In today's era,most
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youngster
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 move to foreign countries for their higher studies which will help them to adapt to the environment. If students will start learning
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foreign
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language languages
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 in primary school it will help them in their basics.
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 like Canada,
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 USA
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 government jobs where
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 is compulsory as well as french. So learning a new
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 can bring different job opportunities.Moving
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, when young ones move to another country or city
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 they interact with new people with different languages and different cultures. So, teaching a foreign
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 might help them mix in their surroundings.
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, I live in Canada but ,
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 am from Punjab. In my ,
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 I learned
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 which helped me get here and do my higher studies.
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 helped me get my job and in my studies as well. Moving towards the disadvantages, In my opinion when pupils learn a foreign
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 they start forgetting their rituals, and traditions because they start distancing themselves from their grandparents and parents. They start taking it as a generation gap because their parents do not understand that
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 because they never learned it in their institutes. Overall, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages because in today's era learning
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different
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 became important with the increase of new gadgets and new inventions.
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