You are planning a business trip to another city. You will have some free time to do some sightseeing while you are there. Write a letter to a friend who lives in the city you will visit. In your letter • explain the purpose of the trip • ask about things to do and see in the city • invite your friend to do something with you during your visit Begin your letter as follows: Dear………..

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Dear Mark, Hope you’re doing well. It’s been a while since our

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meeting. I was overloaded with my work so I didn’t have enough

time

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to write

you

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. Actually, I’m writing to you to share some good news. I’m having a business layover in the UK

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the

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week. My company arranges a big party for their most successful employees in the head office in London due to which I was invited. What’s

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I’ll have some free

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so I hope to see all the beauty of London. I’d really appreciate it if you could recommend

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some places where I can spend my trip. By the way, I’m so interested in modern art so I want to visit some exhibitions near the city

center

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, I would be glad if you share with me the addresses of top English restaurants. I can’t imagine spending my free

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alone so do you want to join me? I’ll be free from the 5th of September till the 7th of September during the whole day. I’d be happy if you could find some

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to spend

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with me. I look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Anna

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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8 paragraphs

200 words

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