Some people think that humans can use animals for their benefits. Others believe that this practice is wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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have been used for many aspects

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as food and medicine.

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, stopping using

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for our benefit is impossible.

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, I believe that we should not mistreat them for selfish purposes. On the one hand, it’s obviously understandable

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why many people oppose taking advantage

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animals

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for personal reasons.

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animal

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the animal

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is unreplaceable protein source, people seem to depend on

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this thing

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too much and ignore

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affect

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environment

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. At

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point, greenhouse gas from livestock is an example. Following

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, research by Robert Goodland and Jeff Anhang, the authors of Livestock and Climate Change, indicates that raising

animals

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for food produces 51

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of global greenhouse gas emissions each year. Meanwhile, commercialize lab-grown meat which is an alternative way to raw meat, is not focused on investigating

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the study and development.

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, I firmly believe that mistreating aminal for personal reasons is very cruel.

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, many

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livestock

are killed

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using many evil ways

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as cutting

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head

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or putting them into boiled water which is against many ethical aspects.

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, there are a number of bloody sports like cockfighting and dogfighting which are organized every day for enjoyment, while fighting they harm each other too

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that they died on spot.

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, governments should pay attention more to organizations or people that organize these terrible sports and give them some strong punishment. In conclusion, we have to depend on

animals

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, which provide many benefits for

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.

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, in many ethical ways, we should treat

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animals

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less

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and stop using them for selfish reasons.