Some people think that humans can use animals for their benefits. Others believe that this practice is wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
For many centuries,
animals
have been used for many aspects such
as food and medicine. Hence
, stopping using animals
for our benefit is impossible. However
, I believe that we should not mistreat them for selfish purposes.
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animals
for personal reasons. Although
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animal
is unreplaceable protein source, people seem to depend on Add an article
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point, greenhouse gas from livestock is an example. Following this
, research by Robert Goodland and Jeff Anhang, the authors of Livestock and Climate Change, indicates that raising animals
for food produces 51 percent
of global greenhouse gas emissions each year. Meanwhile, commercialize lab-grown meat which is an alternative way to raw meat, is not focused on investigating Change the spelling
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In other words
, I firmly believe that mistreating aminal for personal reasons is very cruel. Subsequently
, many livestocks
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livestock
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such
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their head
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or putting them into boiled water which is against many ethical aspects. Fix the agreement mistake
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Furthermore
, there are a number of bloody sports like cockfighting and dogfighting which are organized every day for enjoyment, while fighting they harm each other too badly
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Therefore
, governments should pay attention more to organizations or people that organize these terrible sports and give them some strong punishment.
In conclusion, we have to depend on animals
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