Some people think that humans can use animals for their benefits. Others believe that this practice is wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

For many centuries,

animals

have been used for many aspects

such

as food and medicine.

Hence

, stopping using

animals

for our benefit is impossible.

However

, I believe that we should not mistreat them for selfish purposes. On the one hand, it’s obviously understandable

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why many people oppose taking advantage

from

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animals

for personal reasons.

Although

,

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animal

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the animal

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is unreplaceable protein source, people seem to depend on

this thing

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too much and ignore

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affect

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environment

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. At

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point, greenhouse gas from livestock is an example. Following

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, research by Robert Goodland and Jeff Anhang, the authors of Livestock and Climate Change, indicates that raising

animals

for food produces 51

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of global greenhouse gas emissions each year. Meanwhile, commercialize lab-grown meat which is an alternative way to raw meat, is not focused on investigating

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the study and development.

In other words

, I firmly believe that mistreating aminal for personal reasons is very cruel.

Subsequently

, many

livestocks

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livestock

are killed

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using many evil ways

such

as cutting

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head

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or putting them into boiled water which is against many ethical aspects.

Furthermore

, there are a number of bloody sports like cockfighting and dogfighting which are organized every day for enjoyment, while fighting they harm each other too

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that they died on spot.

Therefore

, governments should pay attention more to organizations or people that organize these terrible sports and give them some strong punishment. In conclusion, we have to depend on

animals

, which provide many benefits for

human

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.

Nevertheless

, in many ethical ways, we should treat

animal

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less

cruel

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and stop using them for selfish reasons.