Today many road accidents occur. What do you think are the causes of this? Make suggestions to reduce them.

Nowadays, the number of road
accidents
increase noticeably. Some claimed that
this
situation happens frequently
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because the transportation systems are not well-designed and the
traffic
laws are not strict enough to deter citizens. In the following essay, I will reveal some causes and
also
some resolutions. Undeniably, the
poor
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designed transportation systems
cause
many terrible
accidents
.
For example
, some
traffic
lights are
under
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well-designed and calculated so the passengers and vehicles will often get
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in
traffic
conjunctions and even
cause
bad
traffic
accidents
. So, governments should stand out and try to improve
this
circumstance,
such
as
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and
redesign
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new systems.
In addition
, if citizens do not obey the
traffic
rules, the number of
accidents
will not decrease.
For instance
, some drivers will park their
car
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illegally because they think
this
is not a big deal.
However
,
this
will often
cause
traffic
jams and
accidents
. In order to solve
this
problem, schools need to establish basic
traffic
rules knowledge
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the children and the governments should
also
promote
traffic
safety to citizens. By doing these, people will notice the importance of obeying
traffic
rules and
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well. In conclusion, there are many reasons that can
cause
serious
traffic
accidents
, but there are
also
many resolutions people can follow and reduce the tragedy.
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