Some people think that humans can use animals for their benefits. Others believe that this practice is wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
People
have been using Use synonyms
Add an article
the animal
an animal
animal
for their Fix the agreement mistake
animals
benefits
for a long time ago Fix the agreement mistake
benefit
since
the caveman period to the modern time .But nowadays , there has been a heated controversy about whether Change preposition
from
Add an article
a human
human
can use Fix the agreement mistake
humans
for
their advantage while others believe Correct pronoun usage
it for
this
Linking Words
practical
is wrong .So in Replace the word
practice
this
essay , I will discuss both Linking Words
view
and show which opinion I am likely to lean towardChange to a plural noun
views
to
.
Change preposition
apply
In a
long time ago , especially Change preposition
A
the
Change preposition
during the
cave man
period . Correct your spelling
caveman
Human
have been using Fix the agreement mistake
Humans
animals
for food and clothes which demand most of their basic need . Use synonyms
This
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lead
to the thinking that Replace the word
led
animals
can solve many problems . Use synonyms
Although
it can’t be Linking Words
argue
that animal is an essential protein Wrong verb form
argued
provider
Fix the agreement mistake
providers
but
the advocators of the viewpoint claim that Remove the conjunction
apply
people
are too apathetic toward the impact on the environment and Use synonyms
moreover
, too Linking Words
reliable
on that resource and abandoned the investment into improving and commercializing lab-grown meat . A case in point is despite meat-like protein cultivated in a lab being scientifically possible but the cost to produce is too high , roughly 10000$ for 3 kg of meat grown in Replace the word
reliant
lab
. We can Add an article
a lab
the lab
also
switch to Linking Words
vegetarian
diet which is more effective and brought out slightly less nutritious Add an article
a vegetarian
as
Change preposition
than
the
meat-based meat .
Correct article usage
apply
On the other hand
, Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
also
use Linking Words
animals
for experiments . Use synonyms
Although
we can’t argue about the efficiency Linking Words
in
these experiments as Change preposition
of
it
brought many benefits Correct pronoun usage
they
for
Change preposition
to
human’s
medicine . A case in point Change noun form
human
that
before covid-19 Add a missing verb
is that
vaccine
were given out to Fix the agreement mistake
vaccines
civilian
. Scientists have tested it on Fix the agreement mistake
civilians
animals
to see the side effects of the vaccine . But it seems cruel to the Use synonyms
animals
since Use synonyms
animals
can feel pain and we tend to neglect it and keep using Use synonyms
animals
for experimenting . We need to provide proper medical Use synonyms
assistant
to life-long Replace the word
assistance
animals
and euthanize the Use synonyms
animals
Use synonyms
have
short-lifetime . Correct pronoun usage
that have
Moreover
, Linking Words
people
having illness or cancer should be given a choice whether they could donate their body to the lab or Use synonyms
to
die peacefully
To sum up , I hold a firm Change the verb form
apply
believe
that we should reduce the Replace the word
belief
overused
of Correct your spelling
overuse
animals
as smallest as possible and stop using them for not humane purposes .Use synonyms
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