Many people use distance learning program to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much attending college or universities. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

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distance learning
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. They can learn
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working. And via the
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, they can learn a lot of things with the
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online to
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their interpersonal skills,
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peers. And they can fast learn other subjects via offline
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for students. Because all
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for
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this
scientific subject.
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online but the
internet
may disconnect. So that they can not
this
film. I always firmly choose to
study
face to
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face
. In conclusion, a lot of
people
think that use distance learning
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, I believe that
people
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to
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study
offline at school or university
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