You travelled by a long distance bus recently and your suitcase was damaged. Write a letter to the bus company. In your letter • Inform the bus company of when and to where you travelled • Describe your suitcase and what happened to it • Explain why the company should pay for a new suitcase

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing

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letter to complain about the damage to my

suitcase

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while I was travelling on Delta Landways from Isleworth, London to Dublin, Ireland. I was onboard bus # 245

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March 13,2022 and upon arrival at my hotel, I noticed that the lock on my

suitcase

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has been broken. I just recently bought a new

suitcase

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prior to my journey. It is a brown

suitcase

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, enclosed in an aluminium casing with two metal handles on the front. It comes with a manual lock pad. I am extremely dissatisfied with the way the baggage handlers handled my luggage. I noticed that they were not paying attention to the labels attached to the

suitcase

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, "Fragile" and it should have been handled with care. To make matters worse, upon unloading from the bus' baggage compartment, my

suitcase

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was dropped to the ground. That could have resulted

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the broken lock. I am entitled to make a claim for the value of the above-mentioned item and request that you send me the details

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what I need to do in order to proceed. Please respond at your earliest convenience. Yours faithfully, Dell Flask

bambam.alexis

Dec 20, 2022

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

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196 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

compensation
sentimental value
distinguishing features
inconvenience
prompt resolution
extent of damage
financial loss
transportation handling
damage claim
justification
documentation (e.g., ticket numbers, photos)

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