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Writing Samples
Band 7

You have rented a house by a lake for the summer. Write a letter to a friend. In your letter • describe the house • describe how you are spending your time there • invite your friend to come and visit Begin your letter as follows: Dear………..

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Dear Mark, How are you doing? It’s been a while since our
last
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 meeting. I was overloaded with my work so I didn’t have enough time to write to you. Actually, I have some amazing news to share with you.
To begin
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 with, I was lucky enough to rent a whole house near the lake in the south of England in a small village called York on my summer vacation there. You just can’t imagine how beautiful it is. It’s surrounded
with
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by

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

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 a forest due to which
this
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 place is absolutely silent. What’s more, it’s full of different friendly animals
such
Linking Words

Usage of linking words is important in IELTS writing. They help create clear connections between ideas in your writing. They improve the flow of your essay by showing relationships between paragraphs and sentences. Using appropriate linking words demonstrates your ability to write cohesively and will help you achieve a higher band score.

 as squirrels and foxes. I couldn’t expect a better trip than that one. Every morning me and my family going to
swim
Wrong verb form
swimming

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb swim. Consider changing it.

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 in the lake after which we cook something for breakfast together.
At
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In

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 the
daytime
Add a comma
,daytime

It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase At the daytime. Consider adding a comma.

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 we walk in the forest and borrow raspberries and strawberries which are extremely sweet here. At the night we are making
fire
Add an article
a fire

The noun phrase fire seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

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 outside the house and cooking marshmallows. By the way, I heard that you have recently moved somewhere near that place. I would really appreciate it if you could spend some time with us. I look forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Eva

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