Human has used animal as a main ingredient for serving their lives in many
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such
as food, fashion,
medicineCorrect word choice
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,....for a long period
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.
However
, recently, because of the development in
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knowledge and thought, there are many arguments appearing around
this
problem, which can be divided into two main thinking trends: a group of people agree that the advantages getting from
animals
can not be replaced and the
second
idea disagrees about that.
On the one hand, it’s obviously understandable
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why many people support the idea that we should stop
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animals
for our benefit.
First
of all, advocators of the
first
viewpoint suppose that animal is an irreplaceable protein source.
In contrast
, we have more choices for our life
such
as lab-grown meat which should be paid more attention
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and focused more
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learning and
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instead
of
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too much on natural meat. In recent year some companies have successfully created
the Correct article usage
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lab-grown meat whose
nutritionsCorrect your spelling
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and taste isn’t different to the real one.
However
, the only disturbing problem is that
this
kind of meat’s price is much
more Change the word
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higher than the normal one, which
also
means that it’s not a kind of food for everyone because they cannot pay for it.
In addition
for anyone who
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religious doctrine firmly believes that if we kill or
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animals
for eating purpose, we will receive bad karma in
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incarnation.
Besides
, the
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factor is
also
practical which
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directly
affectCorrect subject-verb agreement
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human’sChange noun form
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life. Raising cattle
such
as cows,
pigsCorrect word choice
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, .... produce a huge amount of greenhouse gases which human can not easily aware of it. These gases lead to a horrible consequence
that Correct word choice
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our Earth’s ozone layer will be destroyed.
On the other hand
, in
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experimentFix the agreement mistake
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, the need
ofChange preposition
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lab-ratsCorrect your spelling
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is really important but we can partly replace them by doing experiments on prisoners who face
deathCorrect article usage
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penalty
instead
because of
millionCorrect article usage
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trialsChange preposition
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that need to be conducted every year. If we do that directly on
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body, we can get better and fastest results.
In conclusion, I do support the viewpoint of less using
animals
for our
benefitsFix the agreement mistake
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. Changing our habit
everydayReplace the word
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from little
thingFix the agreement mistake
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in our ability
such
as using vegan products in fashion, food, etc to reduce the amount of killing
animals
for getting human advantages.