Some people think that human can use animals for their benefits. Others believe that this practice is wrong. Dicuss both views and give your own opinion.

Animals

’ contributions to the advancement of human beings have been deeply carved into

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history since the very early days.

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is because these living creatures have played a significant part in humans’ daily lives from supplying

of

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nutritious food to manning their duty of maintaining a balanced

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.

However

, there has recently been a heated debate

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whether we should continue

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inhumane exploitation for human welfare or

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should be stopped as being immoral. In

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essay

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I am going to thoroughly explain why civilized human beings should consider switching to and developing new alternative sources while curbing our dependency on

animals

with extensive humane practices. On the one

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it’s distressingly understandable

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why a surging population has taken

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to condemn

overexploitation

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the overexploitation

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of

animals

for humanity’s selfish gains. These advocators claim our raising

animals

for food and other consumer products is not only cruel but

also

damaging to the environment. The accusation is vividly accurate since some developing and under-developed parts of the globe are still adopting the very cruel way to exploit

animals

’ meat

such

as slitting the

animals

’

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without euthanizing them.

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, some

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exploitative farming techniques including pasture-raised and feedlots have contributed greatly to the total amount of greenhouse gases, 51% of the total in the US as

the

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recent report.

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worrying amount could have been cut

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if human beings switch to an alternative source of protein.

On the other hand

,

however

, we can’t totally withdraw our reliance on

animals

because many of our scientific fields like medicine are rather under-facilitated. A case in point is that

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in most drug testing cases humans are still in need of

animals

for medical trials assessing drugs’ efficacy. In conclusion, I do support the viewpoint of less using

animals

for our

benefits

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. Changing our habit

everyday

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from little

thing

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things

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in our ability

such

as using vegan products in fashion, food, etc to reduce the amount of killing

animals

for getting human advantages.