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Parents should take course in Parenting, in order to improve the lives of their children. To what extend do you agree?

#parents #course #lives #children
Parenting is
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importent
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important
 role in humanity . Nowadays
hospital
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hospitals
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course
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courses
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 for being
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parents
.
This
 course would help to take care
their
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 babies but it
do
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 not help
to
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those people,
they
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who
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 have already
one
 or two
child
parents
 because they know how to protect their children. I am against
this
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 to being
parents
 to how
impoove
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improve
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grow
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. My explanation is in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin
 with, being
parents
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 is not
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 mission. There are many
responsibities
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responsibilities
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 increase to take their kids. The parenting course
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to
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guardian
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that
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how to care
their
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 baby , what types of
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 foods and all
massages
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techine
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technique
teaching
techie
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strength
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 of
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new
 borns. It helps
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those people who become
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child
parents
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to
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all these things.
Moreover
, it trends in
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 countries because
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lives
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separate
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to
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 their families. So, they need to know to
care
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of
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for
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 new bones babies.
On the other hand
, every
child
have
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 own unique character and behaviour. The classes provide general information
aboud
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about
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The instructor
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Instructors
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 can not teach
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individuals
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 to all
behaviours
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the behaviours
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child
.
For example
,
one
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one
 is talkative and
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classes
tought
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taught
 general information
how
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on how
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 to
procted
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proceed
protected
 their
child
.
In addition
,
to
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apply
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being
parents
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parent
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 is
natural
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a natural
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 process , and
therefore
 the skills required to be
one
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However
 , these courses are
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expensive
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so
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, it can not effort everyone. In conclusion, the
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 mother and father is god gifted. So, everyone
adjust
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with
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this
 situation. The courses give
lot
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 of information
how
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 to eye
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their children,while, it is different
in
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 all babies.
Therefore
, I disagree with
this
 viewpoint.
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