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 You are going away to travel for the summer. A friend will be looking after your house while you are away. Write a letter your friend. In your letter:  Say where you are going  Describe your house  Explain some of the things your friend must do to look after your house • You should write at least 150 words. • You do NOT need to write your own address.

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Dear Jack, I am writing
this
 letter to request you to look after my home while I am travelling to the Maldives.
However
, I have been waiting for
this
 trip for 5 years but I did not get the opportunity before to travel because of my busy schedule.
Moreover
, I am planning to go Maldives for my summer vacation with my family
this
 June. It was a lifetime dream for me that will come true. My booking for the aeroplane ticket is already done and it will be on the 10 of July, so, I thought you will be here 2 weeks ago so, we can enjoy the local club but unfortunately, you are sick but I hope you are in good health. Please reach my house at least one day ago. My home is an independent villa, it has not only massive 5 bedrooms but
also
 has one big kitchen and it is a two-story building. The entrance to the main gate is on the highway, it will be easy to reach my home because it is just opposite the cardio hospital.
In addition
 to
this
, please take care of my plants after me and give them the appropriate amount of water kindly take care of my pet taffy and I will send you her food schedule so, it will be easy for you to handle the entire situation. Looking forward to your response. Your Love, Gunjan,
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